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Fine Make 143

Fine Make 143

Chapter 143 

It happens so fast that I don’t even realize what’s happening until a few seconds later

The man behind me collapses. One second, his gun is pressing into the back of my head, and the next, he’s a dead weight crashing onto my shoulders. His body knocks me forward, and I lose balance, hitting the ground hard. Blood pours down my 

I don’t even have time to scream because guns go off all around me

There’s a lot of shouting

I gently push the dead man off me, and his corpse lands on my left side

back

My teeth are chattering even though the basement isn’t cold. Dust kicks up with every bullet that hits the floor or the wall. I don’t know where to look. I can’t look. My lungs feel too small for the panic I’m trying to breathe through

I force my eyes open and see the gun

His gun

The man’s fingers are still curled loosely around the handle, but his grip has slackened enough that I can pry it from him. My hands shake as I take it

I start crawling. There’s no time to think. Only move. Only survive

The concrete scrapes my knees raw as I drag myself forward, and the dead man’s blood makes everything slippery. I spot an old metal filing cabinet two feet awaytall, dented, and covered in rust that flakes off when I touch it. It’s not exactly bulletproof, but it’s something. Better than lying in the open as a target. I duck behind it just as a bullet whizzes past and lodges itself into the concrete wall behind me. The sound resembles that of a hammer hitting 

bricks

I press my back to the cabinet, breathing hard. Then I peek around the edge

Most of the men are no longer standing in the open. They’ve taken cover behind the wide concrete columns that line the basement. Knox is behind one

Mateo is crouched behind a large stack of old wooden pallets and some sort of collapsed cardboard box setup. The pallets look like they’ve been there for years, warped and stained with water damage

Two masked men lie dead on the floor. Mateo’s men

I duck again just in time

A bullet slams into the filing cabinet right where my head was, the impact so loud and sudden it makes me bite my tongue

Oh God,” I whisper, pressing my forehead to my knees. This is so much worse than the movies.” 

In the movies, they always make it look heroic. But this? This is terrifying. I can’t hear anything except gunfire and my own scream that hasn’t left my throat yet but sits there like a caged bird desperate to escape

I’m going to die here

I can feel it in my bones. My whole body is vibrating like it’s moments from giving 

I peek again, slower this time

Serena has crawled under the stairs, sitting on her ass with her injured leg elevated. She’s halfway hidden in the shadows, looking as scared as I believe I look

Hunter is crawling fast toward her now that the ropes are off his wrists and ankles. I can see the red marks where they bit into his skin. The man who’d been cutting him free is down. He’s been shot but obviously not dead

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Finn and Soraya are still tied to their chairs, but they’re on the floor now. They must have thrown themselves down. They move together, their chairs grinding against the concrete as they drag themselves inch by inch toward the stairs

Another bullet hits the wall beside me, spraying concrete dust that gets in my eyes and makes them water, I drop back down, my spine hitting the filing 

cabinet hard enough to rattle my teeth

I close my eyes and cross myself. It’s not something I’d normally do. I’m not even religious, and I’m pretty sure I’m not doing it right. But there better be a deity listening right now

If i make it out of here alive,I whisper under my breath, I swear I’ll be good. I’ll listen next time. I’ll stay where I’m told. I won’t get curious about things that aren’t my business. I won’t-” 

But even I don’t believe myself. I’ve never been good. Not in the way that word means when people talk about being saved or blessed or worthy. Not in the way that would impress whatever deity might be watching this horror show and taking notes

I keep mumbling anyway. Pleas to anyone who might be listening. Deals I know I won’t keep even if I live long enough to try

And then suddenly- 

Silence

Everything stops like someone flipped a switch

No more bullets. No more shouting. Just the loud ring in my ears and the uneven thud of my heart. 

I keep still

Are they all dead

Please, God no. Surely the gunfire has drawn attention. The police must be on the way. The building’s not exactly soundproof, and it’s not an entirely closedoff area. Someone had to have called 911 by now. Someone had to have heard

I stay crouched, eyes shut tight enough to see stars. I’m not moving. Not until someone drags me out kicking and screaming. I can’t bring myself to look. I don’t want to know who’s still breathing and who isn’t. I can’t look at Knox, especially if he’s lying in a pool of his own blood

No. I shake my head so hard my neck cracks. I won’t let my brain go there

Knox can’t be dead. He can’t be

And then I hear him

It’s okay, Bunny,” he says. You can come out.” 

My head shoots up so fast I get dizzy

Knox

I peek around the edge of the filing cabinet and see him standing there. He’s still got his gun raised, still aiming it at the stack of pallets where Mateo is hiding. He seems calm. But his shirtGod, his shirt is soaked on one side with something dark and wet that can only be one thing

Blood

He’s leaning sideways, favoring his right side as though the wound is affecting his balance. But he’s alive. On his feet

The gun in my hand drops to the ground with a thud I barely hear over the rush of relief flooding my system. I scramble out from behind the cabinet, feet slipping on blood and dust and spent shell casings that roll under my shoes

I reach him in seconds. My hands press to his side where the fabric is darkest and wettest. The blood sticks to my fingers

Chapter 143 

You’ve been shot,I say

I’m fine,he answers, but he flinches whenever I touch him

He knew. He knew he’d take a bullet even before he shot that man behind me. Mateo had been pointing a gun at him, after all

You-I shake my head, not sure of what to say

He looks down at me with steady eyes, like I’m the only one in this room

Beside us, I hear Finn groaning

I think I just broke my broken arm again,he says as Hunter helps him up, the chair still partially attached to his legs by rope. Next time you provoke a psychopath, Knox, maybe tell him you’ve disowned me first. I’d rather not be caught in another shootout this century.” 

Would you shut up?Serena snaps from her position under the stairs. It’s your fault you got captured, coming to my house and making stupid requests at night. Nobody wanted to kidnap you, idiot.” 

I would appreciate it if everyone could keep their voices down,Soraya says as Hunter moves to her next, working at the ropes around her wrists. My brain’s been ringing since that first shot was fired.” 

Finn grunts as he tries to stand, nearly toppling over in the process. It wouldn’t have gotten this far if Knox had just said sorry like a normal person instead of turning everything into some sort of masculine pride contest. He cares about no one else but himself.” 

A loud slap lands on his face

Finn reels backward, hand flying to his cheek

Say one more word and the next cast will be for your jaw,” Hunter says

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