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Did Eliana know

Did she know he’d murdered the baby she’d prayed for, sacrificed for, bled for

Would she ever be able to forgive him when she found out the truth

The rage and selfhatred with nowhere to go, Milo drove his fist straight through the glass display case. Blood gushed from his forn knuckles

Hot blood dripped onto the medical report, staining the damning words. Suddenly remembering something, he stumbled like a drunk man toward the 

nursery

Soft light filled the room, making the absolute devastation even more brutal to witness

The cheerful wallpaper with dancing teddy bears was splattered with black paint, turning innocent cartoon faces into something out of a horror movie. A crystal snow globe lay in a thousand glittering pieces across the hardwood floor. The white crib they’d assembled together was overturned and splintered, stuffed animals torn apart with their stuffing scattered everywhere. In the cold fireplace, charred remains of tiny onesies and blankets still smoldered… 

Seeing the nursery they’d lovingly prepared together destroyed like this, Milo felt like something was eating him alive from the inside out. Every breath was agony

He couldn’t fucking believe Eliana had been strong enoughor broken enoughto tear apart every trace of their dreams with her own hands

It’s fine,he whispered to the destroyed room, his voice cracking. It’s all gonna be fine. We’ll try again. Eliana and I will have another baby.” 

But even as he said the words, they felt like lies. Every breath just brought more crushing guilt about what he’d done to Eliana and their child

He had only one thought nowfind her. Find her and somehow make this right

With trembling hands, he grabbed his phone and called her number

The number you have dialed is no longer in service” 

The cold, robotic voice echoed through the empty mansion like a death sentence. Panicking, he tried texting, tried Instagram, tried everythingonly to discover Eliana had blocked him on every single platform

The harsh reality hit him like a freight train. She was really gone. Actually gone

Eliana’s parents were dead. Their childhood home had been bulldozed for a shopping mall years ago. She had no siblings, and he’d never bothered learning about her friends because he’d been too wrapped up in his own world

In that moment, Milo realized with crushing horror that he didn’t know his own wife at all

He didn’t know who she turned to when she was hurting. Didn’t know her favorite places to hide. Didn’t know anything real about the woman who’d loved him with her whole heart for three years

The only thing he could remember was her mentioning wanting to get back into fashion design

But that could mean anywhereNew York, LA, Paris, Milan. The world was enormous, and she could be anywhere in it

For the first time in his life, Milo felt completely, utterly helpless

As he spiraled deeper into panic, he spotted something on his study desk that made his heart skip

His office was completely offlimits to everyoneexcept Eliana, who quietly organized his chaos every week without being asked. MaybeGod, pleasemaybe she’d left him some kind of sign, some way to find her

Milo rushed over, hope blazing in his chest. But as he got closer, that fragile hope shattered completely

Two documents lay on the mahogany surface. One was that fucking scorecard he’d dismissed months ago. The other was their divorce papers, already signed in Eliana’s careful handwriting

Contain Milo Our Love Score Has Hit Zero 

6.9

His hands shook as he picked up the scorecard. He remembered glancing at it before, rolling his eyes at what he’d thought waspettan 

per, kod laughed it off because everyone knew fillana worshipped the ground walked offmo winy 

some stupid list

give an 

But now, reading each entry with the clarity of devastating hindsight, every single deduction felt like a blade twisting in his chest

Missed our anniversary dinner for Harper’s art show opening. -10 points.” 

He remembered that night. Eliana had worn that blue dress he loved, had made reservations at their special place. He’d canceled last minute because Harper had been nervous about her gallery debut

Called Harper’s name during our anniversary dinner. -15 points.” 

Fuck. He’d actually done that. Eliana had gone silent for the rest of the meal, but he’d been too distracted to notice

Forgot my birthday but remembered Harper’s was the next day. -10 points.” 

His fingers trembled as he traced each line. Every negative symbol represented another moment he’d chosen Harper over his wife. Another time he’d broken Eliana’s heart and been too selfish to care

Each entry was like watching a timelapse of a woman slowly dying inside

Every minus sign was another knife in his gut, reminding him exactly how catastrophically he’d fucked up. How completely he’d destroyed the one person who’d loved him unconditionally

The final entry made his vision blur

Chose Harper over our baby. -5 points.” 

The pen had torn straight through the paper from the force of her writing. He could practically feel her anguish bleeding through the words

This wasn’t just a scorecard. It was a roadmap of how he’d systematically murdered his wife’s soul, one devastating choice at a time

And now she was gone, and he had no fucking idea how to find her

As he struggled to breathe through the crushing weight of his own guilt, the study door suddenly swung open. Milo’s head jerked up, desperate hope flaring- 

SORRY CAPTAIN

SORRY CAPTAIN

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